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Making the joke before anyone else can.

Shell: "Yes person who could be a criminal running from the law, I'll gladly hide you from this aura user who can sense you."
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:iconultimatefanofroblox:
"I don't have any friends left to help me!"


Maybe your friend can help you. You know? Your friend from like, 20 seconds ago. Help you from himself?
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KittyWarlord Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Little bit of a critique for the second panel, the perspective is all messed up. The rock Shell is standing on makes it seem like the point of view is behind her, looking onto the water at an angle, making it seem like Izzy is swimming in water that's above the rock somehow. I would have made it so that you could see the coast, maybe even make Izzy slightly obscured by the rock.
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thekidthatyoudontkow Featured By Owner Edited Feb 25, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
well need to call the 911 about a loss girl . say that they think she been kidnapped so they dont think it is a chase going on
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CartoonCrazy007 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Well that went ahead rather quickly.
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TheGuardianEevee Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018
idontgetit
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:iconcalvacades:
calvacades Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Calm down Izzy, take a deep breath and then you can explain it
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Yoshifull Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I usually don't mind flashbacks, but this one shows so many bad parts of Izzy, it's painful.
There are parts where I don't find some ground to understand her there. We are down the road where one point towards character development is to have her and Lucky apologize to each other for the wrongs that happened in that time period.
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YellowRaichu Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Well... This is... something. I don't even have the words to decribe what I'm feeling right now...
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:iconrat-man1:
Rat-Man1 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting. ^^
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ElementarShadow Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018
What is Shell saying in the third panel? 
Are you Izzy or are you crazy? 
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:icondenruka:
Denruka Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty sure it's "Are you okay?!" I mean though she is a water type she still kinda just jumped off from the top of a waterfall hahah
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xelaalex Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018
I still find it so weird, way back in 2004 I come up with a character inspired by Tails from Sonic, Xela (he's in my icon) who is an otter/fox cross who spins his tails like a boat propeller to swim...then 3 years later Game Freak come up with the exact same idea.... .w. same muzzle shape and everything!! Xela is my avatar here's proof!
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MickeyMario64 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Student Artist
Where's a convenient shaped aura-proof lamp when ya need it? XD



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LEGOmaster64 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Student Writer
Undertale  for the win.
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ECHO173 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018
I don't know why she can't just keep running/swimming away, it's clear that Lucky couldn't keep up, and she had the advantage thanks to her swimming quickly with her twin tails, she really didn't need Shell's help
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Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Panicking, not thinking correctly, Lucky would follow the river
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ECHO173 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018
Was she stronger than Lucky?
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Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, but she wouldn't want to knock him out cold. plus he has the items
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ECHO173 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018
Sneak attack. Try and steal the Items. run away as fast as she could.
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Again, panicked.
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Tyranitar885 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
seriously?!

Izzy is freakin' make Lucky seem like the bad guy now? How in the world are there still even fans of her at this point? I hate her now.

Also Zander, I thought you had originally said you wanted the comic to focus on Neon. While I won't blame you for wanting to include character backstories, I feel like this backstory has gone on for long enough that all the focus has been taken away from Neon. To be honest, this backstory should have been its own comic, not a part of the HIF comic.
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Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
And I can't just suddenly stop the flash back, it would be jarring and out of place.
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Tyranitar885 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
you could always leave the flashback at a cliffhanger. if you want to be logical, it is unlikely Izzy would get to tell her whole life story to Neon before someone (like Zander or Meo for example) would interrupt them.

Also, I still miss seeing Neon. And I want to know if his eyes are still glowing. And I want to know if Neon hates Izzy now. And I...
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Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
My intonations weren't to make fans hate Izzy or Lucky. I'm just s*it at story telling. 
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Tyranitar885 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think you're bad at storytelling Zander. I wouldn't be watching you if I thought that.
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't want people to hate Izzy...
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Tyranitar885 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Then why have her throw a tantrum and then make Lucky seem like the bad guy? Those don't really make sense together.

It's like trying to get your homework done by playing video games. Those won't exactly work together.
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Man-in-crowd-4 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018
I love Izzy's propeller tail while swimming.
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:iconearthb0undness:
EarthB0undNess Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Buizels do that in the anime too
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:iconskies-zen:
Skies-zen Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you just played the victim, Izzy
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Did this make you not like her?
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:iconskies-zen:
Skies-zen Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Well it made me like her less?
But i don't totally dislike her :>
She's the one who helped Neon!
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DimentionJumper Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018
Boy I heard of this scenario before.
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ultragamer420 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018
How many riolus are in this comic?
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Four.

And please don't tell me they all look the same, one of them has black fur, Shell wears a pink cape, is female, has more girly hair, Zander has a red scarf and red eyes with simple hair and Lucky has messy hair with a green scarf and purple eyes. ^^;
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ultragamer420 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
They don't look the same you can clearly see the difference in their designs I'm just surprised at the amount of riolus there are. But that's a good thing surprises mean uniqueness.
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:icongatoroidrage:
GatoroidRage Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Lies! LIES!
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Lies?
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:icongatoroidrage:
GatoroidRage Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Lies
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
What lies?
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GatoroidRage Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Student Digital Artist
While it is true that Lucky may be looking for her now, I assume that she's referring the fact that she's trying to lie by saying that he's hunting her down (Or simply, kill her). I may be wrong though
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sbinoplane Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
That water looks kinda cold
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
It's freezing
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sbinoplane Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Is Izzy icy then? She should chill
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:iconzander-the-artist:
Zander-The-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Water Types don't feel the cold as much as other Pokemon would
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sbinoplane Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Good to know!
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